some suggestions to make it better
you have potential, yet there are something things that would make this a lot better.
-Stick to one sprite series.
-instead of length focus on quality
-make a reason for this, I haven't seen the other series, so during the preloader suggest viewing the previous ones.
-don't over use the camera, The camera is zooming in and zooming out where it doesn't need to zoom in so closely. "I had this problem in one of my movies".
thanks for reading =), let me know if this helps you out...