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what the...

Please don't do to be continued.
The art was good, animation was great.
but too short.

kn94 responds:

ooo, thanks !!

Nothing Special

Not bad. Just.. its short, no story, and the red circle that expands at the end should probably be blurred or have a glow effect... it looked awful.

Glad to see you had Sound... Could use music.. Using music is great, it sometimes helps create a guide line to where to put certain actions, and how long a flash should be...

funny and original.

I love the super happy expression he has on his face the whole time. I also liked how you didn't end with and then He Died!! you made a remark of how he wanted to be remembered. Very original and it made me giggle. =)

Nias!

Great! I suggest taking out the buttons to play through scenes. I Loved the action tho. Great Quality art!

Comick responds:

You don't need to go through the button parts if you select the scene in the screen select directly to the flashes, but I felt a little backstory helps the viewer know whats going on since they never met these characters you know? Thanks for the nice score and review! :)

Good Work.

Pretty unbelievable that this was the first animation on newgrounds. submitted 10 years ago... decent animation, good graphics, great sound and music.

funny

most parts were great, very funny ending.

funny!!

This message had to be said =)

it was fine.

Stick Figure animation, annoying sounds. Pretty Good Action... no story. Very Short.

very funny

Good Job. Unexpected =)
a tad short tho..

Has potential!

As much as I dont like Stick figure animations.. this isn't too bad. If you could do this close up action it would be a lot better. Also, blurs are unnecessary, they dont make it look better.. You also need sound. The black Frame bothers me too. Overall.. good action, but can be better!

Jordan, a creative mind always looking to inspire others. Let's make something awesome together!

Jordan Kinsley @JordanKinsley

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